竟然会写外国字，真是小甜菜啊。
[原创] MADE-UP LIFE --- 任晓欧之剧本创作（定期更新）
2004-11-20 08:41:55 和尚 (冰城)
2004-11-21 22:55:27 qq0117 (天津河西)
她是在纽约混的
企图拿这个剧本找个能看懂的什么红粉知己什么的
大家就不用在乎字母的事情了
相信你们都看的懂
不象我，简直就是在看视力表
眼都花了
企图拿这个剧本找个能看懂的什么红粉知己什么的
大家就不用在乎字母的事情了
相信你们都看的懂
不象我，简直就是在看视力表
眼都花了
2004-11-24 18:56:00 michle555 (北京房山)
不要做出什么让自己以后后悔的事哦!
我大一上了一个学期就没上了,过了将近快三年以后,现在的我后悔了,现在想想在学校可以不念书,但是可以好好的过大学生活,做一些有意思的事情.人啊,老是不会好好珍惜眼前的东西,偏偏要等失去了以后才知道后悔,希望下辈子能让我做个聪明人
我大一上了一个学期就没上了,过了将近快三年以后,现在的我后悔了,现在想想在学校可以不念书,但是可以好好的过大学生活,做一些有意思的事情.人啊,老是不会好好珍惜眼前的东西,偏偏要等失去了以后才知道后悔,希望下辈子能让我做个聪明人
Fade in.
INT – SUBWAY STATION
We see a running train on the track from outside.
INT - SUBWAY
Paning inside the train and focusing on a girl's face takes few minutes. Htwe Htwe, Asian,21, wearing black dress, sitting still with her eyes wide open, her feet bare and her smile posed. She's looking at a guy who stands just in front of her. From her point of view, we see everything in black and white, and we see the guy: LOU, Asian, 23, dressed in jeans and T-shirt, smiling at her. Htwe Htwe tries to say something, but Lou suddenly turns to left and becomes surprised. Follow his point of view, we see there're lots of people on this train, dressed and posed all differently. HOWEVER, THEY ARE ALL LOU. Lou turns back and looks at Htwe Htwe. Htwe Htwe seems confused about "this Lou" and "those Lou".
INT – SUBWAY STATION
We see the running train from outside again.
FADE TO:
INT - HTWE HTWE'S BEDROOM – DAYBREAK
The noise of subway turns into the sound of alarm clock, and Htwe Htwe wakes up from the dream. She poses and dazes for a while then grabs the cell phone and dials a number.
As we hear the ring, the screen is divided into two parts. Left side shows Lou's living room when right side remains showing Htwe Htwe's bedroom. So we can actually see both of them during the talking.
Lou is lying on the couch, reading under the night-light. He hears the ring and picks it up quickly.
Lou
Hello?
Htwe Htwe
I just had a dream about you.
Lou
What was it like?
Htwe Htwe
Well, it was weird, ‘coz I saw lots
of you on the same train.
Lou
Were you also on the train?
Htwe Htwe
Of course I was there, but ahhh...
Lou
What?
Htwe Htwe
Nothing, I just ahhh... I just wasn't sure
about you.
Lou (sits up)
What do you mean?
Htwe Htwe
I don't know... I was ... I guess I was smiling at
you and you were smiling at me. We were sort
of sharing and enjoying the moment, but suddenly
I realized that there was something else, something sharp
and real, and it was like ... stabbing. You know that feeling?
I felt like being stabbed, right in my dream ... by bunch of
you.
Lou (laughs)
Bunch of me?
Htwe Htwe
Yeah, I saw at least twenty of you on that train, and each
one seemed so real, but it felt as if none of them was
really you at the same time...
Lou
Does it remind you about the “fact”?
Htwe Htwe
Well, I'm not sure. Is it about the one's appearance and his
nature? It shouldn't be that obvious, right?
Lou
And it can't explain why you saw the individual me and
dozens of me , but not just me and another me.
Htwe Htwe
Right! That confused me also.
Lou
Hummm...
Htwe Htwe
Well... how is your story?
Lou
How is my story? How can I tell you? I have the idea, but
I'm still missing a story.
Htwe Htwe
How come?
Lou
Well, have you ever felt like telling people something
badly, but you don't know how to start? That is what I'm
feeling right now.
Htwe Htwe
Must be painful...
Lou
Not really, sometimes it's even interesting. I mean it's
better than missing an idea. At least I can tell a story
if you give me the beginning and the characters.
INT – SUBWAY STATION
We see the running train.
INT – LECTURE HALL, COLLEGE – DAY
We see a room number – 107 – then the door is pushed open. We step in this large lecture room from back door and get closer and closer to a group of people who pose differently in the front. Stopping at a point, we hear a loud slap of the closing door. All the posed people turn to face the camera, and one of them walks forward. CHEN, Asian guy, 23, dressed sloppily.
Chen
What happened? Where were you?
Htwe Htwe
That's what I wondered about you this morning.
(beat) Where were you for the whole night?
Chen
Wait, am I being interrogated here? I called you in the
morning, but your phone line kept being busy... for the
entire morning! I told you we would went through the
storyboard today before lunch time...
Chen
checks his cell phone.
Chen (cont)
... and it's almost 1:00 in the afternoon right now.
(beat) Do I deserve any excuses, since I'm the director
of this god damn video project?
Htwe Htwe
See how easily you skipped my question.
Chen
Well, fine, then just skip it! I was missing for a night, but
what's the big deal? I only care about if my assistant's
on time.
Htwe Htwe (almost screaming)
I'm not just your assistant, I AM YOUR GIRLFRIEND!
Chen calms himself for seconds and turns back to send the group away. After everyone left, he pulls at Htwe Htwe's hair softly.
Chen
I'm sorry, I was just working last night.
Htwe Htwe
On what? A girl? Was it the one I know, or it was a brand
new one?
Chen
Don't be silly. I was just working on the project. You know
how serious I am about it. Besides, it's important to everyone
in the group. Once we make it, we'll ...
Htwe Htwe
We'll have a problem here, Chen.
Chen
We always have problems. Listen, can we just skip it?
Htwe Htwe
Like what we did before? Everytime, Chen, everytime you
wanna skip it. You can skip our problems, but you can't
skip ourselves.
Chen
Sounds as if we are problems.
Htwe Htwe
You are the problem!
Htwe Htwe gets angrier, but Chen suddenly grabs her close and grins cheekily.
Htwe Htwe (struggles)
What the hell you are doing?
Chen (kisses her)
You look cute when you are angry.
Htwe Htwe (tries to be cool)
Don't treat me like a kid. It won't work that often.
Chen
Tell me what made you so busy in the morning? Who was
with you on the phone?
Htwe Htwe
Someone understands why I shouldn't suffer all of
these.
Chen
It was a guy then.
Htwe Htwe
Oh, shut up!
Chen
Do I know him?
Htwe Htwe (pushes him away)
Don't drive me nuts.
Chen (serious)
Well, fine! If you don't want me to care, what can I do?
Htwe Htwe
That's the way you care about me? You weren't in my
apartment and you weren't at home yesterday night.
That was the right time to care about my feeling.
Chen
Ok! I was with a girl who you knew about or not, I mean,
whatever, and we made love. Is that what you wanna
hear about?
Htwe Htwe
What's the fun of hurting me?
Chen
I didn't mean it. You made me say this. I just gave you
what you were asking for.
Htwe Htwe
Since when you became so shameless?
Chen (clod)
I am who I was, and I'll be who I am.
Htwe Htwe
looks at Chen disappointedly.
Chen (peaceful)
I’ll wait for you in the cafeteria after class.
Chen
grabs his canvas packable and poses to leave.
Htwe Htwe
throws herself into Chen's arms.
Htwe Htwe (cries like a child)
Don't leave me like this. I love you.
Chen
I have to run for the class. Upper Junior never skip classes.
Htwe Htwe
We haven't talked for weeks.
Chen
Then what? You wanna talk to me right before
my class? Come on, don't be childish. Let me join my
Chen (cont)
class. See, I'm almost late.
Htwe Htwe
Chen ...
Chen (hugs her casually)
I'll see you after class.
Chen walks away. Through the closing door, we see Htwe Htwe sobbing, and then, we see the room number 107 again.
EXT – BUS STOP – DAY
The number 107 becomes the number of a bus stop at street corner. The camera pans down: Lou is waiting under the sign. His cell phone starts ringing. When he answers it, the screen shows both of Chen's and Lou's location.
Chen
Hey, I'll be at your place in 10 minutes.
Lou
Cool. But I'm leaving.
Chen
What? What the hell are you leaving for?
Lou
Milk.
Chen
Shit, can't you leave for something more significant?
Lou
Like what? One day, I wake up in the morning and realize
there's a drug dealer waiting for me right outside. So, hey,
maybe I can grab some milk when I finish the drug dealing.
Chen
Don't try to be funny. You've been so good in that boring
“music geek” style.
INT – LOU'S APARTMENT – DAY
It's a small but nice studio. We hear someone opening the door.
Chen
strikes in and drops three packs of water on the floor.
Chen (gasps)
When you said “just milk”, I did trust you.
Lou
following Chen steps in with two large brown bag in his arm.
Lou
Move! Move! You block my way!
Chen
tries to dodge but bumps into Lou by mistake.
They both fall down and drop things everywhere.
Lou/Chen
Damn!
They stand up and Chen looks around Lou's apartment which is clean and tide.
Chen
You are gay!
Lou
All right, before I sue you for that biased speech, help me
pick up the stuff.
Chen
looks at the mess on the floor.
Chen
Why? They look perfect on their spots. How can you figure
out what food you have at home if hiding all of them in
that “ standing-coffin” which is dark, lonely, gloomy and
cold.
Lou
You mean refrigerator?
Chen
Oh, that's how you people call it?
Lou
You wanna help or not?
Chen
I do! What are you talking about? I'm here for helping.
I just wanna make sure everything before you arrest them...
wait... where's the milk? It just fled or what?
They both look around.
Lou
I forgot to get some.
Chen
poses still and slient for a while.
Chen
What a genius!
INT – LOU'S KITCHEN – DAY
It's a simple eat-in kitchen which hasn't any style at all. Panning all over in the kitchen with the soundtrack of “Amelie” in the background makes everything smooth and soft... until someone drops an empty box of pizza on the floor.
Chen
acts as a perfect pizza swallower.
Chen
How come you live like a monk?
Lou
You can't judge my life as monk's rashly just because I don't
live in the way you do.
Chen
Well, I'm sorry, but I will only be able to understand and
talk to the world in my way. So, let's say, to me, you are
living like a monk. I mean, look at you, you barely smoke
and drink, try to be systematic in all you do and you never
chase girls. That freaks me out, man.
Lou
That's not true. I'm fond of girls pretty much.